tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-854045321646825113.post2902267352046461756..comments2023-03-29T08:01:23.338-04:00Comments on The Fiction Femme Fatale: InbetweenThe Fiction Femme Fatalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00287139695913469899noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-854045321646825113.post-1692620842456648442012-08-28T14:01:18.558-04:002012-08-28T14:01:18.558-04:00Definitely keep going! I enjoyed Thea being in the...Definitely keep going! I enjoyed Thea being in the eye of the storm and the pacing is great! Gets right to the point. :-) <br /><br />I like the name Cinda! I agree, I think Inbetween may work better if Cinda says it at the end and leaves the convo intro at "Who sent you?" working Inbetween in later. Just a suggestion. <br /><br />I wonder if by looking at her (Cinda looking at Thea) she'd be able to tell immediately she's not in Inbetween? It makes me curious as to the world she's in and how much it differs if it does from contemporary Kansas. Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823739886038280225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-854045321646825113.post-58858015296511846652012-08-27T14:04:47.939-04:002012-08-27T14:04:47.939-04:00Hee hee it is a Wizard of Oz retelling. I plan to ...Hee hee it is a Wizard of Oz retelling. I plan to turn it into a book someday. That's one of my favorite book series. :-)Stefanie Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563861562421435013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-854045321646825113.post-66276104191290548502012-08-26T14:04:27.332-04:002012-08-26T14:04:27.332-04:00Feels like a retelling of Wizard of Oz. The "...Feels like a retelling of Wizard of Oz. The "lack" of an ending doesn't bother me, but pointing it out brings it to the forefront. I would have preferred the Inbetween being mentioned only once at the end for dramatic effect, but other than than, I liked it. Definitely sounds like it could be part of a larger element. Good job!Kelly Metzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16393486174448300525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-854045321646825113.post-9020150068826832952012-08-24T09:31:17.348-04:002012-08-24T09:31:17.348-04:00Love that bird, Stef and the nods to the Wizard of...Love that bird, Stef and the nods to the Wizard of Oz. Some really great description going on here.Amy Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14868528114764185084noreply@blogger.com